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In a dispute

A dispute is a written record read by somebody who does not know either of you and has no reason to care. Everything you write is evidence, including the tone.

Messages in this stage6
Stage4 of 5
Messages on the site33

Nexus market mirrors

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Published as supplied. Nothing here is monitored, so this is not a claim that any of them opens right now.

The six messages

What is different about this stage

Every other stage on this site has one reader. This one has a third. The vendor reads it, and so does whoever is deciding, and those two people want completely different things from the same paragraph.

The third reader has no memory of your order and no appetite for the narrative. They want to know what is claimed, what dates it rests on, and what you are asking for. A statement that opens with the claim gets read. A statement that opens with the story gets skimmed until the reader gives up looking for the claim.

What a statement doesHow to tell it is working
States the claim firstThe whole thing could be summarised from the first two sentences
Rests on datesEvery assertion has a when attached, and no when is approximate
Separates shown from assertedNothing is claimed that you could not put in front of somebody
Names an outcomeThe reader knows what you want without having to work it out
StopsNothing is repeated, and nothing is added for weight

Volume reads as weakness. That is unfair and it is consistent. A long statement suggests the writer does not think any single part of it is strong enough on its own, and a reader working through a queue will take that hint whether or not it was meant.

What this site cannot tell you

How any particular market handles a dispute, what the windows are, who decides and on what basis. Those vary, they change, and nothing here is checked against anything. These pages cover what a dispute statement has to do, which is stable, rather than which button opens one, which is not.

If you kept no notes

If you are in a dispute and have no notes from earlier, write down what you can remember now, dated today and marked as recalled rather than recorded. A statement built on things you are sure you remember falls apart the moment one date is wrong.

Where this goes next

However it ends, something gets written afterwards. Afterwards covers feedback, public questions and the notes worth destroying. Listing what you can show is the page to read first if you are opening one today.

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